All Comments on 'Kiss My Apocalips Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great end to the story. Would love a follow up a year later where we see Jacob and family with his babies, did they rescue the girls in Arizona? What became of evil hyphen.

jacksfreewilljacksfreewill3 months ago

Thank you! Excellent work

bear1999bear19993 months ago

nicely done, a tale well told..5/5

AardieAardie3 months ago

Great story, just sad it’s over.

pk2curiouspk2curious3 months ago

Very good story . Thank you .

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Brilliant tale well told. If I had a criticism, it would be that there’s too much of this harem nonsense with doting multiples of chicks all over our hero - but it was done with humour at least. Otherwise absolutely 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I had trouble putting it down it was a real page turner.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Thanks!!!!!

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