All Comments on 'Kiss My Apocalips Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Thanks!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I had trouble putting it down it was a real page turner.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Brilliant tale well told. If I had a criticism, it would be that there’s too much of this harem nonsense with doting multiples of chicks all over our hero - but it was done with humour at least. Otherwise absolutely 5 stars.

pk2curiouspk2curious4 months ago

Very good story . Thank you .

AardieAardie4 months ago

Great story, just sad it’s over.

bear1999bear19994 months ago

nicely done, a tale well told..5/5

jacksfreewilljacksfreewill4 months ago

Thank you! Excellent work

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great end to the story. Would love a follow up a year later where we see Jacob and family with his babies, did they rescue the girls in Arizona? What became of evil hyphen.

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