All Comments on 'Kisses from Emily'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

should of been longer but good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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This is real fantasy. In reality, they'd have had "that conversation."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Maybe the end could be be extended

I loved every word, but since I uave a pregnancy fetish, I would have liked more sex scenes1

mezmerizedmezmerizedalmost 6 years ago
Great, however...

I guess you better move to a new neighborhood, if you're now going to pop out kids, and live as man and wife. Depending on the area, people know she's your daughter... Only being a 'town' that means the community isn't very big. (i know, i know.. it's only a story, but come on...)

blackknight314blackknight314almost 3 years ago

Nice story. Thanks for sharing your story.

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