All Comments on 'Kisses in Paradise'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 2 years ago
Tender story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

I watched my mother go from 36C to 38D under similar circumstances. It did increase our teasing which turned to seduction.

TopReviewerTopRevieweralmost 2 years ago

Well-paced and very erotic. Thanks for writing. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Made my dick hard

SmutaholicSmutaholicalmost 2 years ago

Your writing is captivating! So beautifully descriptive. Absolutely loved this, but I'm wishing we had a little more backstory regarding Landon's fixation on his mother. When did he start lusting after her and why? Just has me curious to know more... :)

Crusader235Crusader235almost 2 years ago

Good story, sorry it ended so fast. Sure would like some more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A well-written, quickly paced but complete story. I finished it a little breathless.

A little rough at one point for my tastes - but that's a me problem and wouldn't keep it from being a great story for others. Looking forward to reading your other works.

raraewriterraraewriteralmost 2 years ago

Well told and eloquent described emotion. So happy to have found your work. All the best.

LordDeanLordDeanalmost 2 years ago

Another juicy, well written story. I've read all of your stories and I want to beg you to write more. Please?

GimmemoreM0MsGimmemoreM0Msover 1 year ago

The story changed gears quickly but still I liked it.

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Taboo author having a little too much fun with this dirty hobby... Books available for sale -- my taboo pen name is Susie Anne Devyne, and my bimbofication line is under Catiya Carlisle ;) My dream is to draw beautiful sexy pictures for all my lovelies as well as writing thes...