All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins Ch. 12'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

outstanding writing

The author says that "portions" of this chapter were taken from his "earlier work". One wouldn't know it reading this chapter, because the writing is excellent, and one can tell this by comparing this story with some from years before. That said, this is another excellent chapter in what may be the author's best story yet. It may also be the best chapter yet in this story. Classified as erotic couplings, this story could easily be classified as Romance, since the tenderness, passion, and love that is characteristic of great romance is all here. Five stars.

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

OMFG

Better and better...

This one is the best I've ever read on any site

X-Factor about 3 years agoAuthor

Hi everyone - please click a star if you read this and enjoyed. Thank you!

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