All Comments on 'Kissing Cousins Ch. 21'

The only star to click for this chapter is the fifth one- Five stars for excellent story telling once again. The only flaw in this chapter (if it can be called that) is its brevity. Once again, at the end of the chapter, the reader is left "hanging", wondering what is going to happen next in this romantic drama.

Thank you

Never before has the synchronicity of kissing and fucking been so wonderfully described.

Tongues intertwined are a must during mutual orgasm.

Otherwise, I might agree with one commentator that a longer story would describe the eroticism even better.