All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 04'
by Bowoodstock
- 24 Comments
Anonymousabout 14 years agoDo keep up with the story as I love the way you have of telling it creative
ScarletKabout 14 years agoI wasn't expecting the humour! It's a brilliant addition to your story.
Anonymousabout 14 years agothis was a really great chapter . . both in the wonderful comparisons between the cultures as they both learn more about each other . . and the humorous parts :-) . . . and CATNIP! . . . LOL that was inspired *G* . . . . the stoned kitty into the hand covering his mouth . . this was a fantastic chapter with an ending that has me eagerly looking forward to the next chapter *S* . . . this is what the old movie "Enemy Mine" should have been :-D
Anonymousabout 14 years agoGOD I LOVED the part about the catnip as it topped the whole chapter, stoning the kitty OOH that is such a riot!!
it may have been a wait for this chapter but it was so worth it, PLEASR keep them coming.
ppl really need to get sober themselves by one comment actually camparing enemy mine to this story proves they are on SOMETHING, this is such a far better story
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI'm finding this story very entertaining. I've been waiting all week for a new post. I really love your character development and use of humor. Catnip. who'd-a-thunk-it! Thanks. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoUNBELEVABLE!!!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't get enough.
Seattle WA USA
starry_nightabout 14 years agoI'm really enjoying this story, and the catnip part was awesome. lol Keep up the great work!
after_eabout 14 years agoExcellent story with good development, humor, and suspense. I am also one of the people who have been waiting for a week - this is the top story I'm following.
catman71about 14 years agoits funny easy to read and looks to have a long time in developing
Anonymousabout 14 years agoVery creative!! I love these characters! They have so much personality! You are doing a terrific job explaining who they are as individuals while also explaining their back rounds! I love the humor! This is a well written and easy read. This is so different than other stories on Literotica ! You are one of my new favorite writers! I love the suspense but don't make us wait too long for the next installment!
"and even the smoke from the camp fire seemed to be interfering with ...the smoke"
I love his line!
I love it all! I also love your Garden of Eden stories! I need more more more more!
Thank you! xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Anonymousabout 14 years agomore and more fun with each chapter I read. Now I'm really looking forward to your next post. Nice cliffhanger ending too. Update soon! Thx.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoGreat story, I've enjoyed reading it so far. Looking forward to future posts. Who wouldn't find a real version of catwoman exciting.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoI cannot believe how much I was looking forward to this chapter, I've checked the sight many times a day between chapters, I have never followed a story here like I have followed yours thus far. Please keep up the wonderful work, many thanks, and I wait the new chapters anxiously.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoPLEASE KEEP IT COMING AND QUICKLY I AM SOO INTERESTED IN WHAT HAPPENS TO HER AND HIM NEXT SHE IS NOT GOING TO SHOOT HIM I THINK THERE IS SOMETHING OUTSIDE THE CAVE THAT WA ATTRACTED BY THE SMOKE ....
Anonymousabout 14 years agoWe are waiting further adventures of this couple. Don't let this story stop here.
VictorDoUrdenover 13 years agoWhat does she do? That is the question and cliffhanger. Loving the ride your story is giving me.
blackscorpion_666about 2 years agoJust found this story in March 23rd., 2022, I think it's one of the best story's I have read since I found Literotica about a year ago. It saddens me to fined out that Chapter 14 which was dated 06.22.17, was the last of the story and that was almost 5 years ago. Chapter 14 left things open and I would like to see the two main characters bring peace to both peoples, and maybe see them return to the planet they were on. Also did you do a book on this story would like to know hope to see the end to this great story that you started
Tomdullyalmost 2 years agoI'm hooked if I have to wait years after part 5 I'll shit you would't believe how many writers and there pretty good how they start a story but stop and and they never finish they are not as hafe as good as annaballe she is the author of home of horny monsters you should check her out and so far, you and her are on the same par as they say,I couldn't put it down so I hope it's longer then upon a savage shore that's a great story so I hope it's a long long series. have a Blessed Day
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