All Comments on 'Kita'thalla Ch. 05'

I love this story so much. The characters are so refreshing and very likable. Looking forward to reading some more soon.

Excellent!

love the humour of the story and how its taking time to develop please continue . and please find a way to burn more catnip:)

this is another great chapter . . . it seemed like a "bridge" chapter, and those are so important in a great story . . yes there was action . . but what came after was more important, the realizations and learning about each other . . . . . definitely looking forward to more :-D

I've been following this series with some interest, but -- and perhaps this is just my own impatience! -- if you could 'throw us a bone,' if you'll excuse the expression, that could take the edge off for a few of us. In my humble opinion, sensuality, as opposed to raw sexuality, could be highly effective here and still allow the tale to keep the amazing tension. Either way, keep it up!

Perfect ending. Absolutely beautiful, there. I laughed.

I can't tell you how much I appreciate that you didn't go for the "We are alone, so we must screw" thing right off the bat. It's refreshing to see a story and not a *story* (waggled eyebrows).

Also, and this is odd, your grammar and spelling are near impeccable.

One of the best stories yet yes burn more catnip

this is such a good tail. I love the whole part about the fireword at the end. Mechmanas

I know that it takes time and you are doing great with the story but I wish it was longer the need for more is killer

first off NICE critter, chitin is such a wonderful substance for armor plating and containing explosions. It was a very good tension breaker for the catnip episode, nice start and pace for introducing Kitas` past trials that made her what she is and since you brought up humanities emotions and protective atitudes dont forget in the story of humanities ability to also forgive and at times look past other problems to accept others. have her pick the wood next time and give her another dosing of catnip

It was good to see Eric ally himself (physically & emotionally) with Kita in order to break through both the native beastie's tough outer shell & the public facade that Kita uses to mask her private despair over the death of her parents.

I am definitely a fan of your writing. Thankyou for such an enthralling story. This is the sort of tale I search for in the bookshop but rarely find.

loving this story you are writing , looking forward to the next part!

I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! THE "GUYS '' BEFORE ME SUMMED IT UP PREATY NICELLY.

MORE PLEASE

this is a great story. it's so difficult to find stories on this site that are more a story about the characters than a story of mindless sex. i mean, sure, the sex stories are great, but when you find a plot-heavy story, you find it easier to relate to the characters. and if such a story comes to unadulterated activities, then you feel as if you've been watching the characters develop for years up until that point, rather than a very brief period of time. thanks for writing such an enthralling story. i'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

This is developing to be one of the best stories on this site. It is wonderful in many ways, one being the process of learning about each other and that your so called enmy and you maybe more alike than you think. This story remainds me of Vet Nam, where we demenized the enmy in order to justifly our actions only to discover that we had so much in common.

thank you for a wonderful story and I am looking forward to the next section.

Great story so far - reminescant of the movie "Enemy mine" starring Lou Gossette, JR and Dennis Quaid and a bit of avatar thrown in for the character likeness. That being said, I am greatly enjoying this and while I eagerly look forward to the next chapter, I hope it never ends.

Very good so far cannot wait for the story to wind to its climax and conclusion. Only weakness for me is a I cannot completely picture the world around your characters. That said it is refreshing to read a story with a plot and character focus as strong as this has.

Truly one of the BEST in a rampant shit hole of werewolves and vampires the the nonhuman area is. Though there are only a few other catgirl (any type really) stories that are this intimate.

better and keeps my interest up.

In addiction, I haven't ... addition?

Sorry if I already sent this.

We refused to help Ho Chi Minh kick out the French ("We can't do that, the French are our friends"), so he went to the Soviets for help, which made him our "enemy". That put the propaganda machine in high gear, just like cannabis had in the thirties...he became our enemy because he played footsie with our enemy to get what he needed, so we defended the REAL bad guy, Ngo Dinh Nhu, who was the puppet the French left behind, and wound up in a quagmire of a war that we STILL have not gotten over. Politicians are such bitches...war is hell, but it makes a few people rich so "...praise the lord and pass the ammunition!"

the dialogue between them is very entertaining and enjoyable.

Haha! I knew the first game he'd teach her was go fish!

I reckon he's just found a way for humans to win the war. Weaponise catnip!

Wel done again, voted five.