All Comments on 'Kitten Ch. 08: Pussy Jewelry Later'

I read this and believed every word. I wish for something like this in my future. Your writing is very good and your sense of humor made me laugh several times at your asides. I felt it. Well done! Five stars! I can't believe I am the first to comment on this...

That's quite an ending for your Kitten Ch. 7 story! As always, your descriptions of the activity come from a place of observation (& participation?). One can believe a lot of what happens, and desire a lot of what happens to happen to US! I like how you included more of yourself in the story, too.

Criticism? Katie acts, talks a lot like Kitten. Physically you made them different but it doesn't make sense that she calls you Sir from the beginning. Suggestion - have her use that term at the end, just before she leaves? Then you get the feeling that she's accepted the new relationship. Also, for someone to squirt when they have never squirted...? Explain the physiology of that. And lastly, Kitten squirts or orgasms in this story better/more than she ever has in the past. But that's what she does in every one of her stories! XXX

Kitten Ch. 07 was completely true. Kitten Ch. 08, this story, was totally fiction. I appreciate your input and your constructive criticism.