All Comments on 'Kitten Love'

Very lovely story.

Ilove the story and the only bad thing about it is how short it is. what will happen. I need to know

it seemed incomplete as if you'd gotten tired of writing it and wanted to move onto something else.

i really liked this tory however i hope you are going to do a part 2 to this story. It ended to quickly.

My thanks to everyone for the great comments! Keep an eye out for part 2 of this story - AM

Please don't leave it there.

Can't wait for more. One of the top five stories I've read perhaps. Very, very good!

Like the others said, this story is not done. There is a family's murderer to deal with. Hope you do continue as you said you would.

loved this story very much. the premise is the great part, and i hope the two of them start to go places in the future. encore, encore!!!

Okay, I like the story, but what was the comment about Ben Affleck? He was the BOMB in "Phantoms"!

:-)

Seriously, it was a good story with some witty dialogue. I thought the pace was a little off after the transformation, but it wasn't a deal breaker and certainly didn't detract too much from the charming characters.

What a great story, I come here to read the raunchy stuff but this made me cry and cuddle my cat. I wish she could become human.

The dialogue here is great, as are your characters. I really *like* Mitch, and the sex was both touching and hot!

This was a great story. I read all kinds and though Sci-fi is not one of my regular genre's I thought it was great. I was a little worried about her turning back into a cat or having a litter of half human babies though... :/

But great all the same. {^_^}

I look forward to your continuation as you left one or two things 'hanging in the air'. Thank you for the pleasure.

there would be more; enough to mess up their, or his, life I bet.

I'm sorta wondering; if he were to get his old face back through surgery, would Mia still love him?

He has a major problem right now, she's gonna wear him down to a 90 pound weakling.

Good story, fun story and a hot story, too!

stories,,, growing up in the mountains years ago, without radio or tv or modern visceral time killers, we used to sit down almost every night to listen to gentle stories like this a lot. and before the total disruption as well as intrusion of games and other highly visual pollutions, like tv, video games, etc. you remember every story vividly after listening to it just once,,,,

thank you, angelomichael

Great story, I've never written a coommet about a story that i've read befor, but I just had to say that you've done a great job. PLEASE write more.

Very good romantic story. Your character development was strong enough that you might consider a sequel.

very sweet and sexy :).

A really sweet tale. The idea of sprites and such has been around forever, and the treatment here worked really well. The poor guy helped a friend and was rewarded in the end. Nice...

Please don't stop here, this story has so many good elements to it. It surely has a long way to go yet!!! John B.

Mitch is a Hero.

I rly liked this story. The whole way thru I was so scared it'd have a sad ending, like Mia would become more human, meet an attractive guy and leave. :( But I like that she kept the unconditional love she gave as a cat. :) Mitch was also a very likeable character, and somebody we WANT happiness for. His unselfish wish was rly amazing and a great swerve given what the story summary said. :)

Plz end it here unless the future is going to be happy for them and they stay together. I dun want to see them sad :(

loved it, hot but not vulger and very sweet. I'm so happy with the happy ending wish though that Mia and Mitch would have ran into Jess and shown her what she missed.

This story is sooooo sweet. Hot and nor voulgar. Mitch has deserved to be loved. I wish that his ex find out that he find someone more pretty, sexy and better than she. I wish that girl in store and that bastard Toby were ground crushed by the sweet of Mia and beautiful of love between Mia and Mitch.

Yeh, ive probably read 30 stories from Literotica, loved alot but never felt the need to post a comment, but this one... Is just perfect in my opinion =)

Keep it up!

Me

oh my god . . . this story is so incredible

please please please more . . .

it sooooooo deserves to have a happy ending :-)

Really wonderfully written - the story is too cute, absolutely to die for. Hot sex scenes, an engaging story, -and- a happy ending :) Lovely job

I love cats and it appears that if you don't; you hid it very well. The story seemed to end very abruptly as I was expecting Jake to reappear and cause Mia problems. Is another story with these characters in the works ? Hope so. Ron

This whole story just kept getting better and better-- nice lead in and sex scenes!

Wonderful Story...I am a cat person and this story just appealed to me on so many different levels. Sweet and loving but very erotic and well written! Mmmore purrrrretty please!

What a wonderful story for a cold Sunday evening! My cat Maya is curled up besides me...

I cried a bit and giggled and am just feeling warm and fuzzy! I HOPE there will be a second part!

This was one of the best stories that I have read. If you could make a sequel, that would be awesome. The only bad thing I have to say is that there should be more to this story, it is so intoxicating. Keep on writing this way for ever.

This was a terrific story, I really enjoyed it.

Great story very well written.

Although hows he going to explain to his (few) friends that Mia is now a human?? That might be an awkward conversation

Excellent fairy tale. One of the best stories I have ever read on the Net.I hope you can carry on it together with Series of matters.

i usually dont read the long stories, but this one is great!!

this was a remarkably GOOD story and this reader in far-off Soth Africa, thoroughly enjoyed it. Superb writing skills.

This was the first time I had ever read a story over 4 pages long, because I'm weary that it will drag too much. But this time it paid off. I loved it completely. The story was perfect! Continue writing, because you have skill. Excellent skill.

READING THE OTHER PUBLIC COMMENTS IT STRUCK ME

THAT WHILE PEOPLE WERE COMMENTING ON IT BEING

A LONG STORY. IT FELT TOO SHORT TO ME. IN

THE MEANING THAT I WISH IT COULD HAVE GONE ON AND

ON. IT WAS THAT GREAT A STORY.

It's a very good story. Great plot. But I wish that the man who had burned Mia relations to s cinder had gotten his just rewards.

This was a truly awsome read. Most of the time you don't get an indepth plot with deep emotions and characters that are "people" instead of sex zombies that only think with the sexual organs betwixt their legs. (Not that I mind all that...:D) I had a fantastic time reading this story and would really love a continuation. Though from the post date, I highly dought that will happen. But if this is it, then I am happy. Again you have written a truly fantastic story and I will undoughtably be re-reading it again in the future, and telling all my friends about this lil'fic!

One of the best short stories I've read ever, anywhere.

I enjoyed the plot of this story more than any I've ever read on literotica. Very nicely done. I'm excited for part 2... no pun intended. ;)

This is definitely one of the hottest stories I'v ever read.

This is really heart warming and worth reading. I am a Mitch type of guy myself. Thanks.

I enjoyed this a lot. a very sweet story. sort of a cliche plot, but you had enough creative bits to keep it interesting and enjoyable. i'm glad i read it.

now write more. :)

This story is amazing. Looking forward to a possible continuation.

Bring on the family and howabout Mia meeting Jess

A nice and uplifting story

Don't touch it. no sequels no second chapters just....*sigh* perfect.

Billy's full recovery over his own... I don't think anyone out there woukd've done the same awesome wish

This is easily my favorite story. Would really like to see a second chapter.

Excellent story. Congratulations.

Very sweet, well drawn out characters, good pacing, good story development, and very nice ending.

It finishes at the right spot; it would be superfluous to continue.

Awesome story!

great

I wonder how many have longed for this very incident to occur. I once enjoyed the company of a wonderful kitten that ended up preferring me to her actual owner. Before she was spayed, I swear there were times it seemed she was presenting herself to me when she was in heat (I was lonely at the time, so maybe I misread it).

Anyway, I enjoyed your exploration of the concept, the detail of Mitch and his selfless, heroic nature and the intense feelings they have for each other. You ended well enough, but I echo many comments here that it could have been substantially longer and more in depth. That prick Jake, for instance, with his threat to "finish the job" could have made for an intense addition or sequel. Also, the PT Angie and her son, Billy. Could have been amusing to see how Mitch explained Mia, with Billy likely knowing what happened as kids seem to do. Oh well. At least we have fairly thoroughly developed characters to finish the tale in our own minds.

I get one big question though. When something like this occurs (animal becomes human, character transferred from fantasy world to ours, etc), what would happen in the long run with no formal identity, like a SSN, any records or the like?

Honestly I was worried that ass hole of a next door neighbor was going to to something terrible to one of them .

and the best kind. A love story with a lovely twist. A must read for romance fans. Good show...Take care -- and have a holly, jolly holiday.

Her new favorite toy - chuckle ....

Just don't let her bat the ball(s)!

LMAO!!!

Thx

I think that was a fantastic story. A female kitten's dream to be his woman... a dream of being all loving, all devoted, all to her favorite owner, who saved her from a fire. Even though he couldn't believe it... and had a lot of great amounts of sex...

what a great story. I definitely a worthy 5 star rating!

TiM

The conversation between Mitch and Dave was worthy of Joss Whedon. I can think of no higher praise.

I wish there were more chapters to this. That and Jake needs to be shot...

A wonderful story. I would like to see additional chapters to resolve a few things, like a mother and ex that both need to be slapped, a close friend that would be more than curious about the profound changes in Mitch's life, and a sadistic bastard who really needs to die horribly. And lastly, Mitch's return to a job he loves.

If *ever* a story needed to continue, this is it...{sulking in the corner, waiting for another installment} (Yeah, 5+ stars...)

This cries for another chapter!!!!

Sign me up for the next installment.

Yeah, I definitely hope you write more of this story.

wondering where it goes from here.

there are so many directions it could go. so many issues to resolve. so many questions left unanswered.

This is a great story, but it could certainly use just a bit more.

Worse yet it looks like AngeloMichael doesn't write much anymore. The last posted work was 06/25/12 and before that it was this story in 01/02/07...

Sir, I'm reading you for the first time and I'm so excited. I absolutely LOVE the LIFE you gave to this storey. I can see and feel it happening and would love to be part of it. You write so beautifully and convincingly that the flow of this tale never missed a beat. It felt like your heart and soul conjured up this fantasy from a real experience. I chose to believe in you and pray you continue to write....SOON. GOOD LUCK and THANK YOU for a wonderful, arousing and thought provoking Love Storey. KimXO

Great plot for a movie. Wonderful story. I have two cats and love them to death. Jake truly needs to be eviscerated.

I think the author had fun writing this. Using words and phrases like, she clawed at his boxers, looked at him with her almond eyes, and of course there was her pussy. One observation, I am sure that when he slid into her from behind, it could not be confused with doggy style. . I too loved Dave.

Oh how I wish MichelAngelo was still around to finish this masterpiece.

First of all, PHENOMENAL character development. That's a super sad way to start out a story, but you did a great job with it. There were several parts that had me laughing my ass off(ben afleck). The fairy thing was a little weird but hey, she has to turn human somehow. I like how she got a wish too. Some things I have questions about: how the hell is he going to explain to Angie a) no more cat Mia, b)there's now a super attractive woman living with him named Mia, c) he's not absolutely devastated over the loss of Mia, and why d) is there no phone call inviting him to Billy's recovery party, e) is it that whenever a cat turns into a human after always being a cat she's always a white girl? That last one is just an observation but I would like answers to it.

Actually I all ready have written a scene that answers a, b, c, and sort of d. As for e, it said in the story Mia as a cat's wish was interpreted by the Fey as impulses/ideas/images/what-have-you in her head not clear worded thoughts. She really only majorly knew Mitch so she imagined herself as like him but female.

to see the comment and response from AngeloMichael. I hope all is well and that it means we will someday soon see more submittals on Lit.

hoping

hoping to find Ch. 02. Perhaps, AngeloMichael, you will soon be able to complete your draft?

How to:

Mitch and Mia go fishing again. They take a reminiscent walk around the area where their wishes were granted and either encounter Dave, or Elma reaches out to them. They learn that the Fey has decided to do something for Mitch because he was so selfless with his wish by using it to benefit someone else. This can come in several different ways. The scars slowly/gradually clear, being replaced by a renewed, blemish free visage, over an extended period of time. or a clinic offers to perform the work on his behalf. or an organization adopts him as a project providing access to a specialist for surgery. or . . . . . .

There remains the unresolved issue of documentation for Mia.

And something really needs to happen to the very evil pyro-torturing neighbour.

btw: Elma is a very creative name for the wood nymph. Willow would also have worked. Pine, Fir, Oak, Walnut, Cedar, Redwood, Aspen, and so many more, not so much.

Only thing that could make it better...?

Would be more of it...

Seriously???! Wtf!!!! I have found some good stories on here but nothing gripped me like you have... Please please please tell me you have more in the way???!!!!!!!! I need it like I need air. Do they have babies? What happens to the fuck face Jake? Angie and Billy? Oh my god!!! I need more!!!!!

Well that was fun!! ...and I'm perfectly content with the way it ended, unless of course they get home to find the neighbors house burned to the ground and jackoff jake laying dead burned to a crisp, half trapped under the collapsed porch roof... With a big cat crouched on top of his smouldering corpse taking a shit! Yeah, that would make me happy! ;)

...actually Im glad the story ended without another confrontation with that dickhead! I was almost afraid to finish the story for fear he would pop back up and twist my stomach out of my happy place, heh!

Thanks for writing!!

*Holds up plate* More please.

Please?

PLEASE?!

I really enjoyed this story as I am a cat lover and have had a cat most of my life. I find them mysterious, possessive, but oh so loveable. I love when you show them affection and the purring you hear makes owning a cat worth it. Of course I always wonder who is the master and who is the pet. The story is well written with and enjoyable story plot and excellent character development. I see from previous comments that they all would like to see you continue this most excellent story. So you might give some consiseration on continuing the story as their new life together brings new experiences for both of them. Maybe them even starting a family together? Retired Army NCO

... you left a serious threat unresolved. A happy ending would've been a better ending than leaving them living next door to an unpredictable, psychotic and violent predator. Even the unsympathetic cashier is left in danger. Unsatisfying.

Need a part 2 maybe three with confrontation with that fuckhead Jake, family and friends

We need a resolution regarding Jake, though. He needs to take one on the chin for being evil.

I really enjoyed this story, and I love the authentic kittenness of it; she really would have tried to open the cans of tuna.

Yes, still hoping for a sequel. I come back to write more after years, other folks might too...maybe? Pretty please with catnip and sprinkles?

Yeah, Jake needs to die a slow, painful death in a nice car wreck off the beaten path. A slow, low temp burning fire, roasting him from the bottom up! ...with all the stray cats coming out of the woods to see what all that human noise is! Lol.

...also, I can't imagine attempting to brush any of my cats' teeth, rofl!

...now how are we going to get Mia a birth certificate and social security number? Heh.

Really good read just needs some more installments.

A really great short story. It truly is a complete story in and of I self and leaves one wanting more. Very high praise indeed. I wanted it to continue, but I’m happy with the story that we got. A small, perfectly formed pearl of a story. Fantastic premise, lovely detail and characters.

Crippled burnt man, flaming animals and a child with things going bad ( don’t want to give it away) what are trying to do? I mean good lord.

Ailurophile and then some! Good tale/tail.

God,I love to hear a cat purring in my hands while I stroke him/her

Great opening chapter??

Having had about a dozen cats come through my household over the past 35 years, I find Mia to be perfectly believable, both as a cat and cat-turned-human. Each one has a unique, individual personality, but all of the various facets of who Mia is have manifested at some time in those who have shared my life and home. 5 stars, and hoping for a part 2 someday, if only so Jake can get his just desserts.

This was the sweetest thing I've ever read. Wow, just wow!

"Tinkerbelle is a whore and a slut! And that fucking pixie dust gets everywhere!" Dave grumbled scratching his balls. "Puck is an arse! Never loan that guy money! Why should I have a name like those?"

Bloody funny as fuck!!!!!

10/10!!!!!

Angus is a fine Scottish name, leaving him a bottle of poteen as a thanks- Can't actually say the word- bad manners to the fair folk somehow. Nice start, but many threads dangling: jerk of a neighbor is an ongoing threat, jilting ex-fiance' to see Meeow appreciate what she threw away (living a good life is the finest revenge- but seeing her slack=jawed/teary-eyed- yes), reconnect with firehouse crew and Billy's family. ditsy cashier to learn that 'bad boys' are sometimes evil as well. 4X

Anon56

I was in two minds whether to read this story as I don’t normally read sci-fi fantasy stories but bloody hell, I’m glad I did AND I do agree with the previous comment below there’s still a lot more to this story. Well deserved ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Sci-Fi meets romace. Excellent!

This is beyond incest. I hate this website.