by StellaDuBois
Great story and excellent characters.....I love reading nice simple love stories. A few grammatical errors but otherwise an excellent effort. Will be looking forward to future stories.
Cheers
The title and the first few paragraphs threw me off! lol This was sweet, sexy and very charming.
Nice work!
~B
Just wanted to drop you a note and thank you for writing! I found your stories from a suggestion on a story I read. It was other stories you might like. I have enjoyed reading all your stories. I see you have just started posting, I will add you to my favorites, so I can keep up on new stories. The kitten story had a few mistakes with the wrong word, or a word that didnt make sense. But it wasnt enough a distraction to keep me from enjoying the story. No matter how many times I read a story, things slip by me! Ive been in a writing slump for awhile. It seems like I always have something that I have to do at night. Hopefully with the cold weather coming, maybe I can get back into it again.
You are doing good with three hot stories right from the start! Hopefully your last story will work its way up, but even a 4.41 I think is pretty good.