All Comments on 'Knight has Fallen Ch. 02'

Great start; but, check subject/verb agreement and homophones.

Looking forward to the intensity and sparks...

i have read all the stories you submitted. You have some good ideas, and with a bit of care they can be developed into something great. But you do need to work on a few things. If i may suggest, running them by one of the editors to polish them up a bit would eliminate most of the problems. Like i said, the ideas are there and should be developed into something great.

I love the idea of this, but I am getting confused with all the POV switches. There is also verb and word agreement. I would suggest getting an editor, so they can help polish your fabulous ideas. But I love Aiden's character

To Be honest I love that content but I don't like the timing is seems like you have no time to write this you write something and then it takes you forever to write the next chapter and on top of that I feel like it's rushed and you cut it off weirdly. However I really love the storyline!!!!

Another 1 for the never finish file