by LiveCat
LiveCat I have to congratulate you on a brilliant story. I loved the characters and certainly the Knight in Shining Armour and her Lady deserve to live "happily ever after"
Thank you
Well, LiveCat, we could always rely on you to post really enjoyable stories and this one is no different. Believable characters in believable situations and of course the much-hoped-for happy ending. I do have one minor criticism: the first few paragraphs of the story are written in the present tense and then you switch to the past tense. Not a serious problem but it's best to stick to one tense (unless it's for dramatic purposes). That said, another five-star tale (and as good as '...Country Vet').
First off, glad to see you back writing!
All three of us absolutely LOVED this story!!! It’s very romantic but it also raises those issues about the bigots of this world. We were all hoping he would get outed to his fellow ‘worshipers’.
Roxy and Bev enjoyed re-enacting your steamy love scenes as I sat back and watched. They get so worked up when we read together in bed hehe!!
Please keep adding to your wonderful compendium of literary treats. We await your next offering!!
Hugs from me (Lance) and luv n licks from the girls (Roxy and Bev)
I loved it well written with so much emotion. Glad to have another story of your to enjoy thanks for sharing the wonders of you soul and mind.
I loved it well written with so much emotion. Glad to have another story of yours to enjoy thanks for sharing the wonders of your soul and mind.
LC, it is so wonderful to see a new story from you. You have not lost your touch. This is a beautiful, well written romance. Love everything about, the creative storyline, the dog, and how you brought to a close. Your writing has been missed.
Loved it! I really like happy endings. Great storyline and interesting twist on the father. Five stars.
A thoroughly enjoyable read. Your writing is superb, utterly authentic and with a sexual content that keeps me nicely aroused. Thank you for crafted a very entertaining story.
VERY well written and great story line. An enjoyable read top to bottom. Keep up the good work!
Thank you! I first came across your stories in the early days of the pandemic and have enjoyed them all. I finally got to read one in the first 24 hours or so after it was published. Point being I’m glad you are again publishing here. I’m hoping you will continue. Five stars!
Adorable & Loving!
Really enjoyed this story, especially the very happy ending with Marriage Proposal🎉!
Definitely 5*-Star Rated
Welkome back i am so happy about that i have bin true al off your stories at least once
So when i saw your name i new i would enjoy this one
And suprise i realy did
Thanx for that especialy in corona times i need stories like yours
So please keep posting them i can promise you that you have at least one loyal reader/fan
Hopefully i can read another one off your lovely works soon
Enjoyable romp, like a sweet, creamy coffee. Happy to have noticed it, I will definitely be looking at your other works.
It may have made Sarah smile but did it make I smile?
No, it made ME smile.
You continue to use the wrong pronoun when combined with a name or a second pronoun. Always break them apart and see how they sound alone and then combine using the same form of the pronoun.
Corrected phrase above is “...which made Sarah and me smile.”
Liked the story, but the same sex self loathing parent felt like a cop out. Until that A plus.
Have missed your writing for the past few years. I've loved your stories -- they are always so real. Welcome home and keep up the great writing.
So very good! I loved this story, from start to finish. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Very happy you returned since I may not have found your stories otherwise, and that would’ve been a shame. I feel like a kid in a candy store having all these new (to me) stories to devour!
Nice story. Also nice to see that an author doesn't necessarily just vanish when they take a break! One nit to pick: you switched from present to past tense and back a couple of times. I felt a little like Marty McFly... Five stars, regardless!
I love how the drama didn't come from either of the main characters treating each other badly!! Great read, hope you have more in the works. Thanks
Wonderful ...... Im really happy you're back writing such beautiful love stories ....... Your talent is truly a gift and im sotaken by it ...... Namaste
Brilliant it was brilliantly written and for two young ladies to find themselves and too get happily married couple Sarah and Andi hope you will write more soon about Sarah and Andi please and if they have children fantastic story and will reread it again and again you have a fantastic talent for writing these stories write soon please.xxxx
Another very good story made better as longer. Just hope it isn't another 4 years till we can read you again, thank you
This story was precious!! I guess this comes under the adage "No good deed goes unpunished" Maybe if you see marrying Sarah as punishment. <wink>
Such a wonderfully written story! As enjoyable on the third reading as it was on the first. I am very much looking forward to you next story, whenever it arrives.
This was one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Very touching.
Four years gone ... and you come back with something this good?
Welcome back.
This is one of the only stories on this site that I have read. Your stories are not simple sexual fantasy. They are heartfelt and charming spicy live stories. Well done.
Wow, this was such a beautiful story. Thank you again for writing such a real piece of work. The characters are brilliant :)
This is one of your best stories yet, and that is saying something! Really like the characters and storyline!
Nothing not to like!
Thank you for this story!