Your story is compelling. I'm curious to see where Joran takes us next. I also like how he didn't punish Sir Blythe for his indolence, even though he might have deserved it. Looking forward to more, hopefully!
Update: Hello - just wanted to let folks know that I've had to backburner writing since it's not earning enough money to justify working on it. When I do write stories, I'll still post them here eventually, but I won't be regularly releasing anything until/unless the engagemen...