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All Comments on 'Knock Before Coming In'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
not easy to read

So full of grammar issues that I couldn't actually read the whole thing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I appreciate the angle on this a lot. We always need more of this content.

You might need a proof reader though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Autism?

Sounds like she raped an autistic kid

KoxokKoxokover 4 years ago
Good story, but an editor would help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Couldn't get through the first quarter of the story

Idk the story might be great, I didn't read it trough. But you might want to get some english classes before writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
huh

either the kids mentally disabled, or those are really shitty parents to let him be such a shit

MondyBMondyBover 2 years ago

Aside from the terrible grammar, this wasn't a great read. Is English your first language?

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Just Another Random Guy Around Literotica (J.A.R.G.A.L). Very open-minded and bit smart (sometimes), like to read almost everything, from History to Sports (and some stuff between). Like smart talk and listening, sometimes talking but looking out the best stories to read, and ...