All Comments on 'Knocked-Up at the Theme Park'

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Bullrider14Bullrider14almost 3 years ago

Maybe they meet up again on the skylight? Nice story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice story, but sth. seems wrong.

lifted her tank top,

she lifted her shirt up over her breasts

pulled her belly band back up and tank top back down

She could were both a tank top and a shirt but it wouldn't make sense in the heat.

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