All Comments on 'Knockout Ch. 19-23'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story well written, only thing is I would have loved tp see them make their fantasies become reality! Without it the story is incomplete,It would be great if you finished it with a bang! ( His fantasy- her gangbang)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
excellent writing

The excellence of the writing in this superb love story cannot be overstated. Only the brevity of this submission is disappointing. Five stars.

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