All Comments on 'Knowledge'

This was fabulous! Thank you so much. i really enjoy your word choice, tone, tenor and creation of feeling and scene.

The ONLY suggestion i have is the the dual beginning of words (O\our ... W\we) is very jarring to read - in my opinion it dramatically detracts from the flow of the story. We all know it is a BDSM story, i think it is wholly unnecessary - and i typically stop reading stories that have that affectation in them. But i so enjoyed your "Pride" story that i was determined to read it. i'm glad i did!

alex

a very hot & sexy tale that demonstrates the real beauty behind a D/s & Master/slave relationship. as a submissive, i really understand- the full-on relinquishing, does make one seem very different. and B/both are better off because of it. thank you for taking the story to a higher plateau.

You're good. They are like... Hands around the throat, they grip, get tighter and tighter... Thank fuck they are short because I need to breath. When they do end, finally I can fill my lungs.