All Comments on 'Kodie & Martin Ep. 01'

The story is a good start. I know you said it was short so I hope you write at least another chapter.

Please continue!

Great. Please Please do more on this

Absolutely beautiful, hard to put into words the feeling I have after reading.

Wow. Some story. It just happened. They enjoyed each other. This is an interesting start of a new relationship between the two lovers.

This lackedbto much and was really not worth the read

Next chapter

Cool concept. I hope I never have to read the words 'baby batter' ever again, but otherwise nice work haha:)

Nice. Good banger of a story.

Continue the story. This first part was good.

Worth continuing. I hope you’re over your bloc with this one. Good plot ideas don’t

always have to be yours.

I’d characterize this story as “cute.”

That was hot. Please continue with these two!

5 Stars.

Nice start, now they need to make love again when they are sober, so that they will realize that they are falling in love with each other, Kodie want to feel Martins love for her every day and she wants to have a baby with Martin, Mark keeps partying so he does not have a clue that he has drank himself out of his wife`s and sons life... More, please!

Great story! You need at least one more chapter to explore their feelings and if the sex will continue! I hope that it will!

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

Loved it hope i for more chapters

I gave it a 4.

I like how it started. Even after a night of partying and making passionate love they both recognize what happened and are willing to deal with it. I like when the mother ask the son...."where is it going from here?"

She didn't tell him that they made a terrible mistake but...."where is it going from here?" She is telling him that she is open to more sex.

Had I just flooded my mother womb with my cum I would have ask...."Mom, are you on birth control? But to be honest with you the man in me likes the idea of knowing that my baby could be growing in you." It opens up to a lot of conversation. Does she feel the same? If she did get pregnant, would she wish to abort their child or would she want to have his baby?

So much potential here.

Well written short story. I came a quart.

Great story. You must continue to see how things turn out in their future.

Like an expert seems like calling his mom a sex worker. ...between my mom, Kodie, and I. Get rid of all the extra words there and shorten it to "between I and..." I expect you'll feel it sounds a bit off, right? You may wish to edit that bit to ....between my mom, Kodie, and me. I thought it a nice plot mechanism that you left potential follow ups to the story line dangling with uncertainty. The will-they won't-they of it is, in its way, pretty cool.

Love it and there is so much potential to continue it. Well written and very sexy to imagine it. 5

This actually sounds like something that could happen so easy and it is something you should add the what happens next to

That was hot. It could go either way. You could stop here or continue. 4 stars

Loved it keep going 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it 5 stars and waiting on more

In a similar situation I would have fucked my mom too. 5 Stars

Good story.