All Comments on 'Korina's Confessions'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

"He leaned forward and we started making out. He placed his hands on my hips the whole time. He didn't touch my ass. He didn't touch my breasts. He didn't touch my anything."

So what did this "making out" consist of if he didn't touch anything? "Making out" is kind of a juvenile term, but this is an erotica site so you need to describe it. You've heard of "Show and don't tell"? Think about the senses of taste, touch, smell, sight, and sound.

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