All Comments on 'Krissy's Exposed Summer Ch. 01'

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bshell47 over 3 years ago

Good start

Can’t wait for the next chapter .

Love to read more.

2soon2no over 3 years ago

A few simple mistakes that your editor should have caught. I gave it a 5, and wished there was a 4.8 star, but it will balance out in the end.

I will read the next one, to see character development.

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