by collegiate
Get the facts right. Pregnant women don't lactate, as much as we'd welcome it.
nice start to a story. I would have enjoyed a little more on both sides, charachter and ending. But, that being said you have a great category piece here. Also, people who comment on what happens as not being believeable, pregnant women can lactade at times, and just because it is more rare then people think, doesn't mean you can not write about it. So keep up the hard work. Other then that I sould say, put your stories in present tense, it is always better to watch someone do something over having done something.
At least some pregnant women do lactate sometimes a little as part of the hormonal changes getting ready to have the child. From personal experience my partner would occasionally give just a little taste of milk when she was pregnant with our son.
Your facts are off.
For the uninformed yes they do lactate. My wife started lactating a full month before both our kids were born. If you don't work them then no the milk won't come in til the baby does. LoL
I know this is old but I'd just like to say that when I was pregnant with my son I leaked so bad I had to buy those overnight absorbent breast pads you put in your bra. I'd wake up in the morning with what looked like drool puddles but it was where my breasts had been & I always had stains on my shirt. It was so embarrassing!! I almost hated when my husband was home because he'd see.
But anyway, fantastic story (: loved it immensely!!!!