All Comments on 'K's Anniversary Test'

A beautiful, almost dreamlike first submission. Only a few spelling errors. Well paced writing, made me want to be there to watch! Hoping to read more of your work, and soon!

A great exploration of how it feels to submit. I usually get annoyed by spelling mistakes, but I didn't notice any here. I'm British, maybe Ham_Sandwich isn't.

Excellent first story. I liked having K's true thoughts. Completely personal, but I thought Madeline a little creepily over - eager and wish he had not involved someone else in their anniversary. Another time, perhaps, but not that night. Thank you and please write more.

I've always felt that BDSM stories were best when they had an element of romance to them. Loved this one. Look forward to your next offering.

Was the need for a divorce from a real prick. UGH!

1 star.

Was hoping for not exactly what I expected. But got exactly what I expected. Same plot as 30+ other stories. No unique twist nor especially well written.

Congratulations on a good first story. Try not to take too much notice of the mean-spirited comments of those who hide behind anonymity and just keep writing.

There are only a very few stories anyway, and the whole 'thing' of writing is to tell familiar stories in a new way; to my mind, that is what you have done here.

Welcome to Literotica and please write more. Five stars.

Check the first paragraph, my anonymous British friend. She has "were" where we're wanting "wear." But these are mere trifles in an otherwise fine story, hop[e there'll be more!

This is a craptastic story. Not even funny or fun. Who's the boss in this thing? Starts looking like a fraud set-up.

I'm sorry, upon reading this a 2nd time. It's still bad. It still sucks. It is never explained that K is an exhibitionist. If it were me and my master, I would not have that geezer for a master. I would be free and he can go suck on all those other women. I do not play 3rd fiddle.