All Comments on 'Kumar Apartments Ep. 03'

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Booooooooooring

Nothing hapoens. Can’t write dialogue correctly.

Akashkumar888 over 3 years agoAuthor

thanks for reading

Hi anonymous, I am glad that you are still reading. Thanks

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Next part please

When can we get the next part??

pinkykumar about 3 years ago

Your build up is good. But there should be some action also. I like your story but need some sex too

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