All Comments on 'Kyra and the Swordstress Pt. 04'

A great story, I am thoroughly enjoying it, and very curious to see what awaits the intrepid Kyra.

Continuing high-class writing, Jackie. I can understand how Kyra feels about parties, never cared much for them myself. The best thing about this story so far is that it makes the reader want to continue reading. There are some nice touches of imagery and your description of the orgy very well done---you illustrated it perfectly without going over the top as many might have done. Keep up the great work and I'll be watching out for the next chapter.

This is great

Love your stories. Thy have great balance of story, intrigue, an adventure with a little spice to punch up the flavor. I am really looking forward to reading the story to it's conclusion.

Just extraordinary wonderful ….. mordecai — never judge a book by his cover , real sympathy is connected to special souls like soulmates ….. so we should learn to listen to them and taken proper care of them, as such souls so unique and mostly just we met one at a lifetime …. And for the rich, the decadence, the greedies, the humans have done it thousands of years before and will do such orgiastical in the future …. A fab adventure not only for mordecai, for me as well …. Thank you J O H 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝

Maonaigh said it well i like it too 3 to go hope all is well be happy well and safe a fan shayne