All Comments on 'Kyree and I Ch. 01: Half-Breed'

Hey there, I want to thank everyone for supporting this story. I've been a writer for several years now, but this is my first foray into erotic writing. Please feel free to send me any critiques and feedback you have, as I am always looking to improve and hone my craft. Please bear with me, things heat up quite a bit next chapter.

Good start. Looking forward to more so keep at it

Awesome start. You managed to lay everything out so it helped ease any possible major confusion and you did so in an entertaining manner while leaving enough questions about their world and the characters to keep it interesting and leave me waiting for more. Thanks for posting it.