All Comments on 'La Cabana'

A very unusual and interesting tale.Loved the name of the main character.

and I hope this places in the contest!

The Inn Of Lost Souls? Hmm, I wonder if "The Hotel California" is another incarnation from a later day and age...

was fantastic and I loved the ending. All good deeds should end as well. Good luck with the contest.

I thought you were going to continue with your other stories now that Book 2 of Per is complete but, you surprise and delight us again with a beauty short story.

This was a really well thought out story that definately kept my attention. I got a little lost at some points, but that's probably just me. :) Will definitely search for more from you and good luck in the contest :)

This is a great tale, John. I always read the Per submissions but somehow missed this. I found it when looking to see if you had continued with the Tom Parta series (which I love and hope you continue!!) Very interesting!

Good riddance to Jeanette, pity we cannot see that she failed and her lawyer can't help her, and Corey keeps it all