All Comments on 'La Chiave - A Halloween Story'

I liked the build up of this story, and was really interested to see where it was going to go. The sex seemed almost anticlimactic though. I would have liked to see more development in the plot, and for there to be more connection or feeling between the two main characters.

I got chills at the end of this. Something about mythology and old gods gets to me every time. This is a fun story and I'm curious about any future Halloween conversations they had!

Inclined to agree with crittergirl, great idea that you could have developed a lot more and fleshed out the worlds, people etc instead of a quick story. Sometimes more isn’t just more, it’s better. Thanks for writing and posting.

Excellent style and build-up, but it stopped just as it got going. Please write some more.