All Comments on 'LA Seduction'

Great story. Looking forward to your next.

Had me hard all the way through

Great descriptions, from his body to his house near the beach in Santa Monica. I would love to watch a scene like this.

I really like this story great descriptions of what was happening I was stroking myself throughout the story almost not wanting it to end. Great job looking forward to more stories!!

Great story! Got me hard and wishing I was getting seduced!

Read myself right into your role. I want to read more of your work!

I love being a total bottom slut for a sexy hot man and if he brings out my feminine persona then it's certain I'll do anything he wants.

Such an amazing story... Never been with a guy before, but I want it so so so much. Wish something like this happens to me. Top seemed such a nice guy, this is a dream.

I am not gay. But that was soo fucking hot. I am still rock hard. Thank you

I really enjoyed the story. Well written with good pacing and likeable characters. Love that the door is open for a sequel if you decide to write one.

You have me rock hard here wishing I was in your place

God I can almost feel his hard cock up my ass rubbing against my prostate and making me cum as well

Such a hot story

I have to give you credit that was a well written story with a great happy ending. The build up & seduction were fantastic. Look forward to your next story or Sequel.

Oh my God, you literally typed up one of my biggest fantasies. Holy cow. Dream about an invite like that. Amazing job!

God, what a great fucking story.

The slow playful buildup had me so turned on, hard as a rock.

I came twice before I could get all the way through once.

So good!

Woderfull story. Got of 3 times before reaching the end.

It's amazing how we can be so straight but the there is that moment where we become so excited with another men. I am a married very straight but some times love to get of with another men and be the submissive cock lover. Whant I do this I just love to worship a cock.

Well crafted, with smoking hot passion! Oh to feel passion like that.

It was so Hot. I loved how you had a rim job to prepare for anal fucking.so many stories here do not. I use it to before anal fucking. I like to French kiss the guy will fucking him. I disagree it is not just sex. Need that emotional factor for great sex. I found most married men are passionate when having gay sex.

Wow!! I literally created a new reading list for this story called "best!!!" and I don't know if any other story will get added. :P Really just so so good! Please keep writing more like this, I love straight to gay stories so much (no wonder I'm currently writing one!). ;)

Great story. Reminded me of my first time with a man taking me twice one night near LAX. Whew!

Supper hot story.

I only saw one problem, you wrote PROSTATE, once which is correct, then a few words later you misspelled it when you wrote PROSTRATE!

Other than that your story is worth all five stars!

I had a great orgasm!

Thank you!

Jeff needed to have 2 friends come over and work that cum slut..

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and as straight married man who has a lot of fantasies, I wish it was me on the receiving end. Think I would have jumped into it on night one. Someone else here said married guys get passionate during gay sex. Suspect that is exactly how I would react and I would love to be a submissive little slut and let a guy completely use me for his pleasure.

Hot story - as a straight guy it had the effect of making me want to suck cock and get fucked. Real turn on.

Fantastic! This is the sort of fantasy I really want to experience! Exceptionally well written.

wonderful story with great details..got my panties wet.TY.

You really are a good writer. I’m very intrigued by you.

can i come visit too ? sure stretched my panties out

Very hot story! I was hard all the way through. You have a gift for describing a very sensual seduction. Please write more.

So hot.

Hot, hot story. I need to find a houseguest like that...

Great story. Incredibly hot. Like other commenters, I am a straight married guy who has never dipped my toe in these waters, but stories like this make me very curious and thinking hard about trying. This submissive seduction bottom scenario is my ultimate fantasy.

You are one of the best writers on this site, IMHO, and should write more! The well written narrative and dialogue seems realistic and brings the story and characters to life. Well done!