All Comments on 'La Vida Loca Ch. 01'

Great work. Appreciated the cliffhanger ending. Am glad you are writing again.

Very good story ☺️! Well rounded and well written. I like that there is some secret in the background 😍

Very intriguing, I look forward to part two. Five stars so far!

So far, so good

Nice start! ;-)

Interesting part one. Good buildup to the cliffhanger. Looking forward to seeing the next part.

Excellent start. Makes me want to see the next part. Keep up the good work.

Good beginning!

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@BruceWo - great to see your comment! Thank you! I'm glad that you liked that part and I hope that the second and third will suit your tastes too. Oh, and I didn't stop writing, I just have been working on that story for the last two months.

@eraj - thank you for the feedback! There will be more of that secret :)

@Anon - thank you so much! I'm happy that you liked it!

@Anon - thank you for the comment

@Qbikk - thank you, man :)

@DCCoffeeman - thank you for the feedback, next part should be published in the next week.

@MadMize - thank you, appreciate your opinion. I hope you're gonna like the second part as well :)

@Boyd Percy - thank you, 4 is always a good rate :)

An intriguing story. I look fwd to the next chapter.

Good job Marasso! Will you please also finish the trans story?

@Omahakiwi - thank you. I think that the second chapter should be posted on Monday, but it depends on the moderation process.

@Anon - thanks. Yes, I will finish Kinky Anniversary, don't worry. It will take me some time though, because I made a mistake with starting the series without having all chapters written. My mind works in a peculiar way, I have a lot of ideas for stories, so I can be distracted :) But Kinky will be finished for sure!

More please

just enough intrigue, next part thank you like now is good.

@Anon and @2Maria - tomorrow the next part will be published. Thank you for your comments.

Damn I can’t say enough about how good your stories are. I also agree with your bio page comments about dominant women not having to be cruel or abusive. Takes a truly self secure man to love a strong woman. I say this as a 20 journeyman carpenter turned househusband after getting remarried to a Woman who’s an SVP at her company and actually appreciates when I do things for her. 😁

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@Jacktacular - wow, thank you for these kind words! And I agree hundred percent with your comment that a man needs to be self-secure and integrated to be in a relationship with a strong woman. In real life for sure, in stories it can differ, depending on the plot, story arch and characters concepts. A little bit of hardship and tension in the interactions between characters, helps to build them and create a more credible relationship, at least that's what I think.

And I agree with your other comment below my other story, that strong women and t-girls in stories don't have to be 'neonazi evil dominatrix' types. To each their own, of course, but when I read story about strong, dominant woman and she turns out to be cruel, abusive and almost psychopath, and a guy in the story is only helpless shell of a man, then I think that author went to the easiest shortcut, almost as if he used a template.

And that's great that you're a carpenter! This kind of skill stays with you forever, there will always be a need for stuff made from wood, whether it will be furniture or construction elements and so on. I'm kind of a self-taught handyman too, so I appreciate such skills even more :)

This is simply the best story/plot/character building/theme, I've read in recent years especially here in LE. Congrats!

@MonkeyMonkz - thank you so much for your comment!