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All Comments on 'Labor Day'

by Mainliner

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Not Bad!

A little short but at least it's erotic. Thanks

dennyboy2dennyboy2about 17 years ago
Good Start

Liked what I read but way to short. This needs a follow on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More Please

Good stuff, just carry it further.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Terrific

Terrific. Nice short story that gets to the point without having to read 4 or 5 pages. I loved it.

ktmccollktmccollabout 14 years ago
Wonderful

You have the makings of a great, longer piece. I'm curious to see how it evolves.

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