All Comments on 'Labor Day Bike Rally'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thought you had something

Turns out your just another cucky wimp writer . You fag ,can eat my used condoms

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I don't think it's actually a 'cuck' story anymore

Just a slut story now

So it really is 'old man yells at cloud' comments

Pretty funny

wonder203wonder203over 6 years ago
1*

Not really worth the time to read this crap.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 6 years ago
Sure join the fun

Share the diseases!

CaOldDogCaOldDogover 6 years ago
minus 5

You started off with a story and descended into just a crapploa adventure of sickness. Try again when your serious but, this is just crap!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Trumpire

Announcing your reading comprehension problems (the meaning of MRC is in there, just before the abbreviation is first used) as the entirety of your comment was a bold choice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

Garbage

looking4itlooking4itover 6 years ago

Why? Very few stories on here have I ever felt were a complete waste of the words that were used to "write" this. In fact, I'll go on to even say it was a complete waste of the letters that it took to create the words that were wasted on this selection. Served no reason to further or explain the original story. Worse, there wasn't even enough sexual description to even utilize the words in that matter. Garbage written to spite your readership, nice (last part was sarcasm in case you missed it).

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I still don't get the two front teeth thing.

Won't the ones on either side of the gap scrape even worse?

Unless this was written by someone with a half-inch wide dick...

which is very possible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

fag cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Why?

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