All Comments on 'Labor Day Camping Trip'

Sweet outdoorsy tale

Promising first effort, descriptive (could have done without the measurement business), quick to action, nicely situated. Fresh air always exhilarating.

Your writing is good but there was way too much pussy in this story. I don’t think it belongs in “gay male” category. Just my opinion.

I gave you a 5. Cum eating guys are always hot! In your next story, the husband and her thick cock brother should do the sister and both should eat the cum from her pussy,

Please continue this into a second encounter!

Amazing hot! I am about to go on a naked camping trip with a hot guy who has fucked and fed me a few times and his buddy I haven’t met. We all just tested clean and I agreed I not say no to anything!

That was fucking hot, I was jerking the whole time and came with such pleasure, thank you...