All Comments on 'Lace Club: First Day Ch. 02'

I'm so wet.....continue please

How many times, "off of" is going to crop up in a story? Piss poor as we say in the UK.

You have a good tale, but you should have combined Chapters 1 and 2 into one chapter. Also I would agree another commentator that you should have gotten an editor as well as possibly used a Spell Checker. I look forward to you continuing this tale.

Boring, poor grammar other than that I've no idea how to rate this. Although I will read the next chapter and see if it gets any better.

I knew it, all day hair and make-up, mansion party. Thanks for fulfilling my fantasy. Victoria's secret is out.