by Voldemory
your writing is fucking appaling...this is so confusing, i dont know who is talking to who in this.? its all over the place..... with me if its good i say its good... however when its crap as with this i scream crap. A GOOD STORY RUINED BY A BLOOD USE LESS WRITER... SORRY
Dinkyboots you can shut up and not comment since all you are is an ass and second you must be dumb I know who's talking not that hard really and it is a good story not ruined your just an asshole who's not sorry really YOUR AN ASS