by clantongang
i loved your story, i hope you will continue the story with additonal chapters sir, I hope Jena will have his black baby
I really like the story and I hope that you do write another one. I think it was a good idea to throw it a year ahead. And I do like the occult elements I wouldn’t go anywhere near a body horror or anything monstrous. I like the notion of it being from the woman’s POV and her transformed into a submissive without really being able to understand why or how. If anything I would suggest that you do more role-play and light BDSM
And of course much more dirty talk and self Degradation
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Jforjackson - don't worry, I never do body horror or anything similar. The girls in my stories always stay physically intact and looking beautiful - I can't guarantee the same for their minds, I'm afraid.
The continuation of a great classic, cosmic horror, *and* misogyny kink? A well deserved five stars!
Very enjoyable story. It has always been my preference that a story is from the female perspective. That way I can picture myself being in their place.