All Comments on 'Ladies' Night at the Wargaming Club Pt. 02'

by clantongang

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RonhaldRonhaldalmost 2 years ago

i loved your story, i hope you will continue the story with additonal chapters sir, I hope Jena will have his black baby

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Great story. Hope there is more to come.

JforjacksonJforjacksonalmost 2 years ago

I really like the story and I hope that you do write another one. I think it was a good idea to throw it a year ahead. And I do like the occult elements I wouldn’t go anywhere near a body horror or anything monstrous. I like the notion of it being from the woman’s POV and her transformed into a submissive without really being able to understand why or how. If anything I would suggest that you do more role-play and light BDSM

And of course much more dirty talk and self Degradation

clantongangclantongangover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Jforjackson - don't worry, I never do body horror or anything similar. The girls in my stories always stay physically intact and looking beautiful - I can't guarantee the same for their minds, I'm afraid.

AlectaShadowAlectaShadowover 1 year ago

The continuation of a great classic, cosmic horror, *and* misogyny kink? A well deserved five stars!

Amanda1052Amanda10529 months ago

Very enjoyable story. It has always been my preference that a story is from the female perspective. That way I can picture myself being in their place.

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I have been writing erotic stories for my own entertainment for many years, originally mainly BDSM and 'taboo' related but these days largely in the mind control genre. I thought it might be time to publish a few. All feedback appreciated. Just to add that while I find misogy...