All Comments on 'Lady of the Night'

Come on!!!!!

A wonderful story full of promise and a bit of luster. If the author had taken the time to flush out a few details it would be a wonder. My question was when did the coke become a non factor?

I loved the fact that the author has drawn very vivid pictures of both women and how different they are. The contrasts and comparisons work very well.

An enjoyable read as always.

Nicely Done Tribade -

I don't normally read this category. While a few errors are in the story - It read well. I would have liked to have seen more interaction between the two women - and yeah - what happened to the camera?

Keep up the good work! And keep me posted on your upcomings!

Hope they got the camera.

Good story...........too short.

Thanks

I couldn't get past the first paragraph, with all the grammatical errors.

Yes, a wonderful story, and it could have been twice as long with much more detail and interaction between the women.

Well done! robertodavo

Did she take the camera or at least break it?

Lmao hannas idea was truly the best