All Comments on 'Lady of the Night Ch. 04'

perfect, keep writing

Great story (series) I love it! The only thing I would suggest would be adding more detail to thier love making, the end of it seemed a bit rush and laking in detial, as opposed to the foreplay with was detailed enough to be satisifying on it own. Great work, hope they'll be more to come.

I think it was a great story.

It would be a perfect idea for a book.

I think the love making should've had more details but other than that it was great.

Keep up the good work.

Really good story, crying out for further episodes..

Loved it

please keeping writting i would luv to know that happens next..... just a quick suggestion add a little more detail to their love making.... but other than that i love it! pls pls keep writting :)