All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 07'

Exciting chapter!

5

Superb writing, details, characters.

There's more coming. There has to be.

Hopefully more of the Criminal Affairs Series.

Hanging on to the edge of my seat! Great story and has my pulse racing with anticipation of the outcome(s)!

5* effort!

Why are you not writing professionally?

Has anyone ever felt like the biggest idiot ever? Its been a long time since last part and I thought what could Dinah do alone against hardened criminals? And then I remembered.😅 Lol. Waiting for the next one

Great story. Keep em coming!

WOW - what a cliff-hanger. Can't wait for the next installment. Don't stop.

Thanks for the great read!

Great story, you're a born story teller - BUT! Even after an editor, too many annoying silly little mistakes.

Lovely...

Waiting for the next installment...

Wow, seriously you should be publishing your stories. Very literally ALL a of the drama!

There are occasional errors, the one that sticks out is Det Kirkpatrick’s ex b/f Simon. Presumably he’s actually a psychologist and doesn’t study algae for a living. Random spelling errors even if it was amusing wasn’t enough to detract from 5 stars.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

I would have expected “Dinah” and “Carroll” to have fled further than Billings. Still, great tale.

You have got to be one of the biggest Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland fans ever,