All Comments on 'Lady Smith Lock and Key Pt. 09'

Good chapter!

5

Right on point. Brief. Concise. Clean exit with just a few details. However, something in my mind cries for Lady to bet against Brady at least once more. Five stars.

Now if we can only get the ceaser torture scene.. .

Great chapter once again Mr fetish.

Hoping for alice/dinah's redemption arc, if there is any. Do you have any such plans?

These stories are so entertaining, yet frustratingly brief. It's like getting the best coffee in the world, served in a thimble sized cup.

Excellent story and interesting characters. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Thanks for a fine story.

You do plot as well or better than nearly all the writers who post on this site.

Execution is not quite up to that of Bebop3 and Todd172. They use editors. Hint.

Plot=5

Characters=5+

Character development=5

Disdain for readers shown by lack of proofreading=?

I hope we'd get the elimination process as a sequel.

One more chapter or a new arc? Seems like some loose ends or unfinished business needs resolving...

Great chapter. It feels like there’s one more coming. Looking forward to it.

Another great chapter!!

5 starrs. Best author here 👍every f..... g story is just awesome