All Comments on 'Lady's Maid Ch. 03: The Election'

Love the story so far and hope you will continue it for a few more chapters. I would love to see more of Annie and Pixie together, perhaps they could have a private suite of rooms in one of the mansions they live in, which is strictly off limits to anyone unless specifically invited. So they are free to play and expand their roles / relationship. I am surprised that Annie hasn't dressed Pixie in a maids outfit to remind her of her status. But hey you are writing the story so please take it in the direction you want to.

Rgds Al

I have to be honest, Pixie, much as I admire your writing I didn't like Chapter 2 at all. However, this chapter went better for me as it kicked off with laugh: your description of Archie as an upper class twit immediately made me think of the Monty Python sketch Upper Class Twit of the Year Contest. Can I give you a tip? Writing dialect is difficult and your dialogue "Thou art a game lass..." sounded very stilted and unnatural. "Tha'rt a game lass..." or "Tha's a game lass..." would have sounded much more natural. Best to avoid dialect unless you know it really well. Apart from that, great!

She is clearly the brains of the operation, so she does the critical thinking on behalf of the MP. But she also engages in Sapphic submission to a political opponent, as well as her own maid. Well, "Maid"..."Owner"...same thing. :)

Of course I absolutely loved this chapter, and the sex scenes were incredibly hot. As the previous Anonymous commenter said, I can imagine Annie telling Pixie to dress in a maid's outfit, before having her little slut scrub the floors. Although, doing the task in her underwear - or stark naked - would be fantastic as well.

I'm really looking forward to what happens next.

Thank you very much - oddly I had been thinking of moving in that direction :)

Thank you, and I shall take on board your most helpful comments, which are much appreciated.

Thank you - yes, I am exploring the many possibilities this new series opens up - I hope you will continue to enjoy :)

Another good story,I am not into Dom not even mild, like this one seems to be and I don't much care for Annie, but I really like the way you brought out Pixie, I hope Annie gets better and can't wait for the next ch

As Pixie makes such a good organiser and is the brains in the marriage, it makes a nice contrast to being Annie's maid all the more effective in the sexual relationship. I've always thought thec submissive person has more power (at least should have) and you are illustrating it here perfectly.

I am sure we will find out what a MP's wife does, and I'm sure it will be interesting and sexy

Thank you Pixie

Jc

Just read 2 and 3 back to back and am looking forwardto 4. Great fun and hot at the same time. More shades of Wodehouse but we need a 'Jyvette'. Love and blessings, as ever. G xxx

Thank you. So much is a matter of preference isn’t it, don’t you find? Glad you are enjoying Lady Pixie.

Thank you so much. I am glad that something of the real dynamic in their relationship is coming through xx

Many thanks darling xx

Love the twist around in the relationship between the Maid and the Lady, please continue writing more.

Glad you like the role reversal, it’s a favourite of mine. Hope you continue to enjoy it.

Love the threesome - and the cheeky politics!

Sex and politics mixed in a good way

The real divide is not between the political parties but between the old boys and the young women.

It is a bittersweet irony that it one good capable woman is unintentionally defeated by a brilliant woman. But we are comforted by the fact that they can remain lovers, as Pixie will come to Alice's town often from now on.

The role reversal in the bedroom is delightful. Annie, the invisible servant in public, runs the show in private. Both Alice and Pixie, one a self-made political leader, the other a clever aristocrat outshining her daft husband, are submissive to the maid.

Of course, Lady Pixie Fortescue-Smythe is the submissiviest of them all. No mouth has ever licked her bald cunt, and the touch of Annie's fingers on Pixie's wedding night is only a distant memory (from chapter 2). Now she is reduced to fucking herself with an empty champagne bottle while the two women she has orally served so well before, watch in amusement.

But Pixie thrives on service and humiliation, so it is all good.

You do understand the psychology so well. Yes, Lady Pixie is in seventh heaven x

I love the takeoff of a northen accent, the dynam9c between Alice, Annie & Lady Pixie. The cheeky sense of humour makes it such a good read. So I take 5 pretty stars from my knickers, just like anwoman tennis player, and drop them secretly where you’ll find them

Oooh thank you darling Evie, I shall search for them with great care xxxxxx

It is a natural occurrence that a sub would, without questioning, become a play thing for her Mistress and her friends, it is part of a Ds relationship. Another well written piece, showing how a true Ds relationship works. Why am I not allowed to give this series more than the 5 Stars on offer. Such a well written piece of work and OH such a storyline. XXX

Thank you SO much - from you this is such a compliment - kisses xxxxx

Miss Pixie - the dynamics building of the ' frank and sometimes curse ' Maid Annie and the willingness to serve and now be humbled of the smart upper class Lady Pixie is quite entertaining to see. You are capturing the thoughts of many who are the later * winks *

thank you darling Erica - and I am so glad you are enjoying the fun xxxxx

Again Pixie...this is so well researched and I absolutely love the smart story build...well done and Lady Pixie is so sweet and adorable