All Comments on 'Laid Bare Ch. 03'

...could have been a 5* (instead of solid 4*) if not for the many typos / errors distracting from a pleasurable read. I suggest an editor - your stories could be further improved to be the best in this category!

Can't....wait....for....the...next...

You do write intriguing characters and stories.

Although, it would read just a touch more believable with a bit less of the nylon fetish.

This isn't the 80's; you're not going into a county office building to find all the women wearing nylons. That part jumped out as incongruent.

Oh...and "emigrated" is the word you needed for the story about the sister moving to another country. Immigrated is to come; emigrated to leave.

Great stuff Michele. Disregard the two bonehead critics without a story between them.