All Comments on 'Lake Chantrain'

I would have loved to be there when Kelsey sang Crazy. I paused the story and I played it on you tube and I could actually, with my eyes closed, visualized her singing the song. Excellent story, very well written and I have to mention that my favorite Author's normal stories are 17 to 33 pages, so to me this was a true love story. Thank you, excellent series! Your only drawback is trying to tell us when to pause by using Ellipsis', bad idea! I taught college level Creative writing and English Literature and emphasised that your word are to trigger the pause. Kind of Rockie way to tell your reader when they should pause, when done with commas, and, or, but, etc. Load the story in a text reader and you'll either have to edit the dot dot dots out of the story or they will be read back to you. How many Novels have you read where the Author uses hundreds of Ellipsis'? Still a Beautiful story, thank you! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Please don't kill off Kelsey in the next Chapter!

Great story!

5

Honestly loving the ‘Hallmark Moments’ and they added much to the story. Looking forward to th impending follow-ons.

Very well told and highly entertaining story. Keep up the good work!!