All Comments on 'Landing Strip'

Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Five out of five.

HELL I WOULD HAVE JUMPED HER BONES THE 1ST TIME, LOL.

I feel like a right perv saying this.

But real good story

Ooof so yummy 😋

1) bad grammar and writing

2) how many times has this plot been done ?

Interesting story line, but not very realistic.

Short and up to the point. Go, good good.

Stop using seen when you should use saw. Learn English please.

Very hot…so hot when a mother protects her son from the scheming bitches out there…mine always let me see her sexy cunt now and then… I was totally hooked…mmm..

Sexy x

i love seeing a landing strip soI found this story wonderful and quite erotic!

Almost the same words my mother said when I nursed her for the first time in 16 years.

Truly a beautiful story of love. So well written in content and mechanics.

fun concept but please take this as constructive: Your dialogue structure needs some work. When someone speaks, if you have the other person responding in the same sentence, it appears as if it is from the same individual. Even if it is in action.

Example: "You came in my pussy." I nodded in response. <--- that is from two different people and POVs. When readers have to do double takes, you throw off the pacing and add confusion. This will turn off some readers.

There were several other smaller grammatical errors here and there. An Editor will help out with this.

Such fun!

My favorite hot button subjects: shaving, landing strips, nudity, sex between family members. Bingo! Thanks!

Does everyone write like incest is acceptable now? “This is wrong” belonged at the start as it’s completely unrealistic for a mother to ask her son to shave her pussy.

Second time reading this story because it’s so hot.

Yawn.