All Comments on 'Landlord Tales'

Could not get past the fact that when people spoke there were not quotations

i would like to see future chapters even. just use quotation marks for those future chapters.

I'm duly chastened on the quote marks for the next chapter and future submissions...thnx for the feedback and likes

Funny how conservative people can be. There are two conventions: the first is separate paragraphs for each person speaking, and the second is quotation marks. One or the other is sufficient for readability, and the story is easy to read. Either way, I enjoyed it, thanks.

You have a great flow and a natural storytelling feel. You had me in the moment the whole way even without quotation marks.

Clever story. It was simple and straight forward but flowed well and your descriptions worked well.too.