by fantaseeboy
Wow 5 stars. Damn thay was really hot, the stories keep getting better and better. Top 3 author for me m8 keep it up
Thank you for coming out with a new story! I always love your character dynamics and this time was no exception. The plot progression and world building seemed much more rushed than usual though, and the main character seemed atypically one-note. That said, this still had lots of really hot moments and ideas and I'd really like to see something like this again.
As always, you surprise us again. This one breaks out of the mold. Different characters, diff set-up and place. Very sexy story. A bit scary too. Sexy danger. I really enjoyed it.
Dominant or submissive, thick Latina women are the best; they are the most passionate and real lovers, and I've been with white, black, Japanese and Indian women multiple times. But Carmen has all the elements I dream of. Bravo on a great, innovative story.
That was absolutely amazing! I love the idea of there being a genuine connection despite a language barrier.