by StephenThorn
That was wonderful, it really was. I found myself choking up in tears for the poor girl and then feeling all excited and happy for her in the end!
I just loved this story. The Master in it is the Master of my dreams. I am really submissive and would love to live with a man like this. Top stuff, it really got me hot. Thanks for a great read.
It is a blissful read for any submissive woman
I don't know why anyone is saying this is a good story because it is not. I have read a lot of bdsm stories, but this master seemed more like a abuser than a stern master. I didn't enjoy the story and if I were the slave I would of bitten his dick off.
While it was an interesting story, I felt the Master was unjust in his action... he caused permanent damage (the favorite shirt, possibly calling out the wrong name in addition) for a temporary problem (her disobedience)- the punishment is too severe for the crime. All else is pretty good though.
this man was no master! that was straight up abuse, mental abuse. why would anyone take that? i would have left him.