All Comments on 'Lapdancing Girlfriend Ch. 06'

Thanks for the story first of all. It led me to discover the original author and his body of work. It's a shame that he passed away. I hope that this story follows his original storyline and that you're one of his editors or are in contact with them.

My first interest was in knowing where the couple story would end and I decided to check for references to Dan here and in the last chapter of the original story. After 49 (!) pages, it ends in nothing, in a a status quo of sorts. Here, there's very little references to Dan and they mostly come in the beginning. He's being replaced by other characters with the FBI agent taking his spot as the fiancée, the driver acting like the guy that appears to like Jen for what she is and her BFFs being the ones that Jen shares more info with. In fact, Jen didn't even had contact with Dan on this chapter. Hard to root for the couple's survival but then, in the original story, they hadn't exactly the most solid of relationships didn't they? It certainly doesn't help that Dan is at best, the lead antagonist's "spare": the guy that keeps around and treats well but fucks over every change he gets. As that's made by design, there's no much to criticize.

The worth of this story lies in the sexual exploration of the lead female and now in her supporting cast. Again, I've read it but since this is a long story with long chapters, I hope to meet my needs.

This is the most autistic thing I had ever read. Its literally just recycles shit on every page. Its SO unrealistic and you never mentioned Dan once. I doubt its trolling because No troll would EVER write this shit for 27 or so pages. Omfg.

The only good parts of this story and the original RIP the author. Is when Dan watches her act like a slut around his enemy. This whole story is trash Lol

Thanks for continuing this story. So sad about DocCIS. Please continue this story if you can.

Lapdancing Girlfriend is probably one of my top 5 story series of all time. I read about DocCIS's passing on some of the 3D imaging websites last December and was saddened to hear the news. Fantastic author! I will always appreciate the time he took to place his thoughts into his writings!

There are always going to be trolls leaving negative comments but you will notice how they are always anonymous. I would love to see their submissions lol.

Mostly gobbledygook, a few sex scenes, but neither erotic nor excitement nor tension.

Author, my congratulations on the seamless transition from Doccis to DoccisFan.

I am equally impressed by the initiative to finish this series and the skills required to

ghostwrite. I thought Doccis had changed his pen name until I read the comments.

I wish all the luck and karma due you and your collaborators. For myself and Mr. Farrar, thanks.

DoccisFan: you might add DocCis to the Favorites for this profile. It would make it easier for newcomers to find the original source material.

I think you captured the essence of the original series very well, excited to see where it goes! One thing though, maybe bring up Dan some more. A big part of the original was how guilty she felt about doing all of these sexual things while leaving Dan behind. Also there's the crowd that really wants to see Dan cucked, perhaps even in person where she will get fucked in front of him.

loved your continuation of Lapdancing GF, hope you would consider doing the same for Annie Babysit's as well...waited a long time...

You did a great job here. I loved the continuation of one of the best series on literotica. Think you can wrap it up in one or two more installments?

I agree that "annie babysits..." also could use your expertise. You should get paid for this, lol

Would love to see a continuation of this series!!!

You did a decent job, in catching up were the original ended!

Doccis will be missed.

Did doccis pass away or something? I'm lost. Great addition though!

This publisher is not the original author of this chapter. It was actually a rough draft written by doccis himself. So stop praising him as if its his work and dont expect a continuation. RIP Doccis!

Just wanted to say, I appreciate you publishing this chapter..

I don't know how much you edited it, or added to it, but I thought it was great... Thank you..

That said, are there any more rough drafts from Doc, or is this "it"?

Sad knowing Doc has passed, either way, but appreciate you making an effort to keep his works (and words) out there..

When will next part of story will be published.

Excellent job

Truly some of the best material ever written on this site😉. I sincerely hope you have a project in the works, whether it be this, or another. I do hope it’s this though, dying to see a conclusion to Jen’s storyline.

It's a shame that DocCis passed away, please finish this great story.

This is a great story and it would be a shame if it ended here.

Please .. Please .. keep writ

Mr Dewitt hires the sister to be a cocktail waitress without Jen knowing it.

Hello DOCCIS fan have you found recordings for sequels?

Please continue this great story and let's not wait too long.

If you can't go on writing the story, maybe someone else is there to continue this story.

Please let us know if you will continue the story or if it ends here.

In story one ,I realized there is an interesting line. As Jen seats on Chucks leg, she is introduced to Dan. She says,"it's always nice to meet one of Mr Dwights friends." You can take this an write a nice story about mr Dwight taking Jen into a private room to give a dance for one of his friends. a basic lap dance. Then mr dwight comes up behind diamond and rubs her shoulders. Tells the guy the next lap dance will be special, go ahead and get naked. He then strips diamond. Mr Dwight fingers and French kisses diamond, till she is ready to go. She then nude gives the nude guy a special lap dance. The guy thanks mr Dwight and leaves the room. Diamond seats on mr dwights lap and is fingered to orgasm. That's how diamond got use to mr Dwight touching her body.

This is just a recap of the original story!

In a way, I'm glad this story is incomplete. Jen's boyfriend/fiance has been getting the shaft! If this was ever concluded she'd be a mentally and physically ruined excuse for a human being and clearly never be able to be much of a faithful wife or mother. She's an STD ridden cum dumpster now. Where the justice for her boyfriend? They all treated him like dirt and have stolen and destroyed the woman he loved. There's no compensation for what he's lost. Prove me wrong.

Please continue, great job!

U should add Mr Dwight makes jan get bigger boobs

Continue please. Husband sees his wife become slut gets turned on by it and watches her get used over and over

Please continue!

i wish there was a continue to that. You are a very good writer

Fantastic continuation of a fantastic story! Pity you stopped DocCisFan!

Hey guys, I'm going to write the next chapter.

If you do write the next chapter I wish you the best of luck. How long do you think before you publish?

You should continue rotten ANNIE BABYSITS THE KIDS