by themanred
Fantastic start to a well-written story. The low rating is absurd; it was plenty erotic already and it was largely setting the scene!
Let's see how the chapters that follow play out before we start with low ratings. Great job setting the world up!
Medicinal, institutional brainwashing is an underappreciated bdsm/mind control style, I'm absolutely happy to see it written so fully. I, admittedly, feel a bit bad for Lara, but this is top quality writing!