All Comments on 'Larunalia'

I liked it quite a lot. Thanks for sharing.

A really believable story about an incarnate deity. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you!

This isn't just erotic, you've skillfully created an entire, believable world.

Well done and thank you!

I wholeheartedly agree with Tarot. You have created an incredibly immersive world and it is all your's to toy with. :)

I can only imagine where this new land will take us. A story like this one demands continuation, something that only a special few can do. I look forward to the next chapter!

That was incredible. I've been waiting for an update from you for ages and was completely satisfied with this. You always give your chars a believable life and personality. I loved the way these two interacted to one another. It was erotic at the end, but it wasn't what the story was simply about. Absolutely fantastic.

I hope you think about writing more! If not this story, then just anything in general. You have a gift!

You really should do more in this universe its so interesting and I love your descriptions.

Very well done, from start to finish! The end came all to soon, as it does in all good tales!